There was nothing wrong with this story, it was an entertaining read. But it was a little bit to young adult for me. And I know what you must be thinking, But it is a young adult book. I know and I am an adult that reads young adult but this was just to kiddy for me. I am not sure why. I liked where it started but there was just too much school stuff for me. I love the cover art and also love all the bird images on the chapter pages.